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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
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 day and age, many
people
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 believe that verbal communication is more powerful than written one. In my opinion, despite the incredible storing ability of documented paper,
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spoken communication can have more influence than
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written. Writing can be a powerful proof as it can be stored for ages. To be more specific,
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speeches just be able to be saved for decades, written paper can be stored for
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years
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, when
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 make a
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 with other IELTS Xuan Phi countries or the civil, they often use documented paper as
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proof to others.
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, speaking can be more influenced for many reasons.
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,
people
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 who deliver speech can use their techniques and voice to
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 the
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 attention.
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 the reason why speakers like Steve Jobs and Bill Gates can win a lot of
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’s
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 via their
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speeches
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.
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, thanks to the development of technology, spoken videos or
podcast
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 can be spread to every corner of the earth easily,
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 for the written one it can take
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longer to keep
people
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 informed.
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,
people
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 are
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 to choose spoken communication than the other one. In conclusion, many
people
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 state that speaking has more power than writing.
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, I believe that spoken is more influenced as it is faster and
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 to remember.
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