Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals, etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Most Nations in the

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have their public celebrations. Some people think that these are very costly, and it is better if the governments allocate expenditure on more beneficial things. I strongly agree with

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idea, due to the lack of vital public

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and limited source of income.

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of all, some developing

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all over the

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have subpar health

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. The distribution of many public

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is not equal in every country in the

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.

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, Some

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are still struggling to

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necessity.

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, the

government

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should prioritize investing to build public

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. The availability of feasible public services

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tends to increase the living standard of their citizens.

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, education and health

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are some of the essential public

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which are not adequately implemented especially in

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world

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countries

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as in Southeast Asia, Africa, and South America. Ultimately, Hospital, school, and public transportations

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are the basic needs for most people,

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why the

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should allocate more money for these kinds of infrastructures.

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, about less than 50% of governments’ budget was generated and collected from taxes.

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for some reason, most of them could not achieve the targeted revenue from taxes.

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, in order to

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their expenditure, they need to borrow money from other

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due to the limited ability to generate income from taxes.

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, the

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should be cautious before they held

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expensive festivals,

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as Independence day and general elections. To sum up, It is agreed that the

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should spend the available budget more wisely. The reasons for that are many inadequate amenities and limited resources for many governments.