A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses

Dear Alice, Hope you and your family doing amazing.

This

letter is written to you to thank you that I would help me to take care of my house and pet while I am on holiday. I will be going to Kota Kinabalu for five days to visit my uncle .My phone number will be 016-234-5678 just call me when anything happens.Because of the

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I am not sure that I can receive your call in time ,but I will call back when I saw it. My dog called Kelly is a puppy having brown skin you just need to prepare dog food and water for her .The dog food will be inside the cable beside the kitchen in a pink packet.

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,you may help me to water the plant every day and bring Kelly out twice a day. Thanks for your help if you need any more information just call me all the best. Best regard, Lim

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