1. Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

From the past to the present, the transportation system has played crucial roles for humans which are convenient.

Furthermore

, there are many types of them

such

as private

car

, train, bus, bicycle. Some countries consider that roads and highways are not more important compared to public transportation. I agree with

this

statement and provide reasons to support my idea.

Firstly

, roads contribute to the increase of private automobiles which cause the negative effect

that is

traffic congestion.

Moreover

, the traffic jam begets the air pollution in society, greenhouse effect and climate change.

Although

these effects are violent, many communities increasingly use their own cars and purchase them more and more.

Thus

,

railways

should be constructed rather than the road.

Secondly

,

railways

system consumes lesser energy as opposed to

car

usage because an electric source is used which is the clean method and fewer released pollutant.

Moreover

, from research in Thailand, many accidents occurred from human error for over seventy per cent, which killed many lives each year.

Therefore

, using

railways

instead

of travelling by

car

prevent various negative effects. In summary, authors should select an efficient approach to assist citizens in good living. I agree that

railways

are vital to development because of enormous benefits in both the short term and long term. In prediction, the high-speed train has the trend to increase gradually while private vehicles were reducing according to latest policy. For a good example, citizens in Germany have used bicycles with public transportation for over twenty years, which help their people to have more good health and currency

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because they save money by not purchasing the

car

.