Life teaches us the lessons and such lessons are key to success. How far do you agree with this statement and do you think formal education is important or people should rely on their life experiences.

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Every day, people are learning something new, whether or not is related to you. To many of us, these

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are said to be the path to success. From my point of view, I agree with

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statement up to a certain point. I believe

life

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experiences and formal

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are equally important, and I will reason it in

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essay. We indeed take

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from our daily activities,

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as communicating with friends or watching the news on the television. By talking to friends you can gain pieces of information about the subjects;

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, if your friend is a dentist you have the opportunity to be educated by your friend about dental issues.

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, by watching the news you can widen your knowledge about the world.

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as knowing if there is a war going on the other side of the continent, or if there is a pandemic going on that we should be warned about. All

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acknowledgement is not from the textbook.

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taking

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experiences is an important part of

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; it is built based on formal

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. What we learn at school, is to prepare us with base knowledge for the

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lesson.

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, if you did not take school

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seriously,

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you will have a difficult time understanding or communicating with others since you do not possess the same level of

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. In conclusion, I believe in both

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from

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experiences and formal

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are equally crucial to

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. These

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are should be bonded to one another, as they are inseparable educational-wise.

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