Cooking at home is a waste of time because there are so many convenient fast food options that make life less stressful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Taking takeout meals can conserve our
time
,
however
,
this
will affect our
health
negatively. I believe that wasting
time
on making
food
from scratch at
home
is better than wasting
money
on junk
food
to maintain our
health
besides
, saving our wealth. On one hand, fast
food
contains huge amounts of oil and sugar that will cause
health
issues. Whereas, individuals can easily maintain their
health
by cooking their meals either by controlling the amounts of oil and sugar or by choosing healthier alternatives
such
as olive oil, brown rice and free sugar products.
For example
, I personally stopped eating fast
food
and start to cook my
food
at
home
which really helped me to lose weight.
Therefore
, wasting
time
on cooking is it worthy.
Furthermore
, it is true that cooking
food
will waste our
time
but, at the same
time
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it is saving our
money
. homemade
food
is more affordable than fast
food
due to the interest that restaurant takes from each meal
also
they required delivery fees sometimes. Lately, there are applications like Talabat that deliver
food
to our houses but these apps increase the meal price and they do not deliver for free which increases the meal cost significantly. In my point of view, folks should not spend that much on
food
in order to reduce stress or to save
time
. To conclude, cooking at
home
may waste our
time
. Meanwhile, it
maintain
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our body
health
and helps us to save our
money
since the cost of meals will be less than the restaurants if it were made at
home
.
Therefore
, it
worthwhile
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to waste
time
on cooking rather than wasting
money
to damage our
health
.
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