Cooking at home is a waste of time because there are so many convenient fast food options that make life less stressful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Taking takeout meals can conserve our
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,
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,
this
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will affect our
health
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negatively. I believe that wasting
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on making
food
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from scratch at
home
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is better than wasting
money
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on junk
food
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to maintain our
health
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besides
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, saving our wealth. On one hand, fast
food
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contains huge amounts of oil and sugar that will cause
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issues. Whereas, individuals can easily maintain their
health
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by cooking their meals either by controlling the amounts of oil and sugar or by choosing healthier alternatives
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as olive oil, brown rice and free sugar products.
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, I personally stopped eating fast
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and start to cook my
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at
home
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which really helped me to lose weight.
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, wasting
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on cooking is it worthy.
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, it is true that cooking
food
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will waste our
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but, at the same
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time
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it is saving our
money
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. homemade
food
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is more affordable than fast
food
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due to the interest that restaurant takes from each meal
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they required delivery fees sometimes. Lately, there are applications like Talabat that deliver
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to our houses but these apps increase the meal price and they do not deliver for free which increases the meal cost significantly. In my point of view, folks should not spend that much on
food
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in order to reduce stress or to save
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. To conclude, cooking at
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may waste our
time
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. Meanwhile, it
maintain
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our body
health
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and helps us to save our
money
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since the cost of meals will be less than the restaurants if it were made at
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.
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, it
worthwhile
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is worthwhile
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to waste
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on cooking rather than wasting
money
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to damage our
health
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