Cooking at home is a waste of time because there are so many convenient fast food options that make life less stressful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Taking takeout meals can conserve our

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however

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this

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will affect our

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negatively. I believe that wasting

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on making

food

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from scratch at

home

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is better than wasting

money

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on junk

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to maintain our

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besides

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, saving our wealth. On one hand, fast

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contains huge amounts of oil and sugar that will cause

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issues. Whereas, individuals can easily maintain their

health

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by cooking their meals either by controlling the amounts of oil and sugar or by choosing healthier alternatives

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as olive oil, brown rice and free sugar products.

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, I personally stopped eating fast

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and start to cook my

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home

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which really helped me to lose weight.

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, wasting

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on cooking is it worthy.

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, it is true that cooking

food

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will waste our

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but, at the same

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it is saving our

money

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. homemade

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is more affordable than fast

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due to the interest that restaurant takes from each meal

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they required delivery fees sometimes. Lately, there are applications like Talabat that deliver

food

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to our houses but these apps increase the meal price and they do not deliver for free which increases the meal cost significantly. In my point of view, folks should not spend that much on

food

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in order to reduce stress or to save

time

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. To conclude, cooking at

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may waste our

time

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. Meanwhile, it

maintain

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our body

health

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and helps us to save our

money

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since the cost of meals will be less than the restaurants if it were made at

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, it

worthwhile

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to waste

time

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on cooking rather than wasting

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to damage our

health

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ghalia.alansarii

Mar 8, 2022

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