As the population of the world is growing very quickly, the only ong-term solution to the problem of overpopulation is for humans to settle other planets. What benefits has the world got from space exploration ? Do you think humans will ever live on other planets?
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space
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the galaxy
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people
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inhabitat
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one day.
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benefits
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conducted
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develop
products which can be used on Earth. Change the verb form
developing
Furthermore
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, which could Correct your spelling
technologies
used
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people
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people
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humanity
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discoveries
about the universe can lead us to absalutely
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absolutely
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variety
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, researchers can try to check people
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. If it could be possible, we would find second
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number
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that
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planet
is not suitable for humanity
.
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chance to survive from overpopulation and lack of resources for normal living. By improving
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space
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benefits
space
discoveries
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