Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent on to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , the issue of spending a large amount of money and energy on protecting wild species has ignited public attention from time to time.

Consequently

, some people come up with the contrasting view that these resources could be exploited on countries’ overall development . In my humble opinion , I partially agree with

this

view , and

this

essay will seek to examine the complex issue . On the one hand, there are serval reasons why conservative parties opine that animals who are going to be extinct should be protected by all means . The

first

and foremost one is that these species are tentatively the key source of foreign income.

For example

, in Thailand , many

travelers

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visit the Safari World to watch rare animals

such

as Dolphins , Whales and Pandas for their recreational purposes , and , they are obviously intended

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main

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the main

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tourist

attraction

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.

Therefore

, it is essential to pay high attention

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them for economic concerns. In spite of these positive financial effects,

on the other hand

, other proponents assert that the allotted budget should be

first

consumed on the country’s infrastructure , and there are still actual needs

particularly

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in

education

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and health sectors.

This

is because a nation’s economy specifically relies on each citizen’s improvement.

For instance

, the government can give no fees education system as a way of improving literacy rate while the needy people and retired ones are offered free healthcare .

As a result

, happy and healthy citizens can enhance

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national improvement . To sum up , both sides have merits . From my perspective , I am partly on the side with

this

statement because national’s financial income is as equally important as

country’s

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the country’s

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overall development. Total word – 290 , Time -45 mins