A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Mike, How are things? I have enjoyed reading that you are going to camp out

this

summer.

Such

terrific news! I am sure that you are gonna have a great time. You are going to make a bonfire under the stars and tell stories to new friends. If I were you, I'd buy a notebook for writing their addresses for keeping in touch with them. These kinds of friends are the ones that you'll always remember. Anyway, I hope you don't find mosquitos up there. You should buy a good repellent for those little insects. And take my advice: bring a good rucksack. The bad side of camping is that nights are a bit cold even during summer when you are sleeping in the woods. I'm looking forward to listen about your adventures in the jungle and maybe about your

girlfriend. Ha! Well, time to go. You know that I would love to go with you, but unluckily I have to hit the books

this

summer. My best wishes and lots of love. And excuse me for being so slow getting back at you, but nowadays I have a lot of work. Love, Israel

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

196 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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outdoors
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hustle and bustle
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wildlife
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physical demands
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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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