In the past, museums stored information about culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found on the internet and, therefore, there is no need for museums. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
Nowadays, information about everything could be accessed online. These days, technologies are more sophisticated.
People
potentially become a hassle to go outside. For example
, when we have a desire to visit a museum in order to know about historical and cultural sites however
things that we're looking for are available on the internet. This
essay will discuss the technical issues for museums
in the era
of technology.
Let's throwback to the past, when the internet doesn't
have a huge impact to control people
's behaviour and mindset. People
who lived in the time before the internet exist are most likely to go outside such
as to parks, museums
, libraries and others. Naturally, people
became friendly to each other and increased their curiosity toward details of the world's history
. If we speak about history
, the most suitable places to go probably is museums
, because they provided plenty of masterpieces that were created by people
in the past. In museums
also
we could find the whole definition and stories about history
and culture for certain places or heroes.
Fast forward to the present, the usage of museums
is slowly decreased. It causes by several factors. First
, people
especially youngsters doesn't
find an essential for the museum itself. For example
, children don't
feel a sense of curiosity if they went to museums
whereas all of the information could come in a few seconds on their phone including a picture of historical pieces of stuff and its explanations. Second
, they believe rather than go to the museums
, going to another area,for
example
cafe or sports hall are more beneficial for them to grow their knowledge and stamina. It implies that Add the comma(s)
,example
museums
are useless places to go in this
era
. In my opinion, I don't
strongly agree about this
statement because history
and culture are part of science that need to expand. How to expand history
? Is through the present the results of history
itself so the history
will be well-known. According to Mr Soekarno, once said that we should not forget about history
.
To conclude, I completely agree that the visitors of to museums
are falling. Although
, I believe there are sparks of possibility to improve museums
and other facilities become sustainable. In addition
, people
who lived in the era
of technology could help how to mix the era
of globalisation and the era
of the ancients because they are more creative than the older.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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