International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

International travel

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been increasingly popular in the

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couple of decades. It

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benefits to both the tourist and the place they

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trend and will explain why

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believe the latter outweigh its counterpart. Certainly, there are several advantages we can reap from international tourism. In terms of the tourists, they will be able to learn more about a certain culture during their trip which depends on the place they are visiting.

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, if one will decide to go to the Philippines, they will learn that Filipinos are naturally hospitable and will have an understanding

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our history and the traditions we practice. Not only tourists gain something from

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but

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the country, wherein the economy will boost as more travellers

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to see their breathtaking places and rich cultures. Despite

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, the detrimental effect on the environment and the individuals are cannot be ignored. The environment suffers from all the air pollution caused by the plane industries and contributes to global warming.

Furthermore

, the different kinds of garbages that get accumulated by the

people

are getting harder to be

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properly.

Consequently

, it will hurt the environment and the

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that

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place. Individuals will get sick from all

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will eventually

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to financial strain. Usually,

people

from

third

world countries will not be able to provide medication for themselves because the food and rent must

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. In conclusion, the disadvantages of

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trend definitely

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the advantages. It is up to the government to make

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regarding the proper garbage disposal so that the

people

will not suffer and get sick from it.