Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?
Forest is compelling natural energy.Cutting down the
trees
cause global warming and the extinction of living creatures
.I agreed with the statement if the rain forests
are cut down which have a huge impact on the earth
's atmosphere as well as animals which are living in the forest.
Firstly
,if the trees
are cut down in the forests
there is a huge impact on the earth
's temperature.As for the ,
researchers the Remove the comma
apply
earth
's temperature increased dramatically when compared to the last
20 years.Because the public is cutting down the trees
for agricultural purposes and also
civilization.these results in an increase in global warming and cause a rise in the temperature.
In ,addition the human being is cutting down trees
for cultivation purpose this
lead to extinction in the living creatures
.Rain provinces are habitation
for flora and fauna.Clearing these forest result in the birds and animals becoming homeless. For example
, Amazon has a large living habitation
when compared to other forests
on earth
.Recently the government took a project on clearing the amazon for human habitation
which resulted in the death of many birds.So, cutting down the trees
lead to the death of living creatures
and when the animals or birds don't have a place to live they die gradually.So In order to stop ,this
the government made new ideas for human habitation
.However
,later communities do campaign on the issue later the government backed down.
In conclusion,there is a huge loss when the forests
are cut down.It causes global warming and the extinction of old living creatures
,In order to stop this
nation do campaigns and make awareness programmes that the society know about the consequences of the logging of forests
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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