Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are encounter-challenging the quality of life. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries.

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In today's
world
where technology is growing rapidly,
However
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Issues
related to the environment are becoming a challenge for the entire
world
as they are
also
affecting the quality of life of human beings. In my opinion, these
issues
should be addressed globally rather than by individual countries.
Firstly
, all the countries around the
world
are dependent and connected with each other for their needs.
For example
, one border of Nepal is connected to India. Every year when there is heavy rain over there, because of ongoing development work; there is no way for water to flow to the oceans.
Hence
, some of the states which are close to the Nepal border may experience floods in the rainy season. If only India is concerned about
this
issue
and there is no step taken by Nepal
then
there is no point to address
this
issue
.
Nevertheless
, there are some
issues
that are handled globally that are benefitting the entire
world
. For an instance, people across the
world
are becoming more aware of pollution.
Thus
countries around the corner joining their hands to deal with
this
issue
. Plastic is the highest usable substance and is the most dangerous to the environment as neither we can bury nor can burn it. Because
this
issue
has been considered globally, the government of an individual country has started banning plastic. To sum up, all the nations should stand up together to address territory
issues
,
otherwise
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there is no meaning if an individual country has started supervising the problems. There should be some impacts but we can't fully get rid of the situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental problems
  • global issue
  • quality of life
  • address
  • global approach
  • cooperation
  • innovative
  • sustainable
  • international agreements
  • treaties
  • collective action
  • equitable distribution
  • resources
  • responsibilities
  • unique challenges
  • tailored solutions
  • accountability
  • local ownership
  • development
  • capacity
  • combination
  • tackle
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