Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?
The world is struggling with dilemmas to keep things away from them or have close look
on
what's happening around in Change preposition
at
the
society. Some Correct article usage
apply
people
think that media
outlets are worthless and they should stop reading news from social media
as well as print media
. I completely disagree with the statement due to the fact that people
will remain uninformed politically & socially . union policies and schemes will face difficulty and many social welfare schemes will be delayed.
Firstly
, People
will find them isolated from the rest of the world despite such
high-speed internet services if they choose to restrain from media
houses. The consequences would be unimaginable which is evident in people
and in fact
they will lose their right to information that can lead to Add a comma
,fact
the
corrupted or authoritarian regime. Correct article usage
a
For
example
in Russia Add a comma
,example
people
take little or no interest in news articles even though the country is rich and provide 5G internet to the public. Therefore
, it will be a truely
unfair practice and it should be endorsed because it provides checks and balances in politics and Correct your spelling
truly
judiciary
.
Correct article usage
the judiciary
Secondly
, the welfare schemes will suffer a lot which is a setback for people
's health care benefits programs launched by the the
ministry.The new technology is going to be challenging for Remove the redundancy
apply
people
who live in backward areas and there
voice will remain unheard even though they live in a democratic countryReplace the word
their
Add the comma(s)
, For instance,
For instance
Indian union announced demonetisation in the evening but people
has no clue what the state is
trying to do. So newspaper and Add a missing verb
is is
media
play a mediator between state and public which ultimately benefit both.
to summarise, people
should be informed about political leader
and society which is going to be beneficial. public services can only reach out to beneficiaries to avail benefits of authority-funded programs. the Fix the agreement mistake
leaders
media
will play key
role in society even in the coming years.Add an article
a key
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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