It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
children
seem more stubborn than used to be a few decades ago.The newest research stated that it is because of the parents
who are not raising kids properly.So the government decided to have a training course for parents
.I completely agree with this
statement it will help both parents
and children
.
To begin
with, having a child as soon as possible is trending in our society.Consequently
, this
means that young adults should be wise enough to handle an infant.so that cannot accidentally harm a kid.For ,example recently I have seen on television there has been shown an accident in which a baby died due to the irresponsible of parents
. If there would be some experience this
type of situation would not happen.
On other hand, we all know that young people will act according to what they learn.Moreover
, Every human with experience will not able to find the line between parent and offspring.If children
have given more freedom then
they will not concentrate on their studies and they will not respect teachers.For instance, we can see that adolescents are addicted to drugs because of wrong parenting. Furthermore
, if parents
are too strict towards their children
, then
it will affect child mental health and they become introverted as they feel that parents
are their,enemies.
To Summarize, All of these problems can be solved if they attend training for citizens who are about to have children
and already having children
. I reckon that all benefits are overweighing the drawbacks.Courses like this
will not harm anyone and they will bring good effects in society.Submitted by omshanthi93 on
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