You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Sara, I’m so sorry that I haven’t written to you for so long. I was up to the eyes at work, and I couldn’t even have

time

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for scratching my head.

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, I’m going to take a two-week vacation

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month in your hometown. In

this

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regard, I am writing

this

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letter to ask for your

time

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to schedule a visit. I am willing to stay in Pairs for two nights though I prefer to stay there more and spend some

time

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with you. Unfortunately, I should leave Paris on March 14th in order to attend my friends’ wedding in Italy.

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, while I was booking my trip, I couldn’t find reasonable accommodation in the city Centre.

consequently

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, If your friend will not leave with you anymore, I can rent that room for two nights.

this

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does not only help you financially but

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make us spend more

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together. I look forward to hearing from you.

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, please let me know if you need anything from Canada. Love, Dorna

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
warm welcome

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