Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them.
 Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals have suggested that
wildlife
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conservation programs should only be targeted selectively to the endangered species rather than concentrating on protecting all
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, while others have argued that all wild beasts should be protected.
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essay agrees with the former view, that effort should be concentrated toward the protection of the ones that are under the threat of extinction. The essay will discuss both opinions. On the one hand, human
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; one of the major causes of
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habitat destruction are not selective.
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, these
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as bush clearing or burning, industrial waste generation through the burning of fossil fuels, and a lot of others, affect generally all organisms, the only reason some species are not yet being threatened is the adaptive features that make them survive these adverse environmental changes resulting from the
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of man.
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, government protective measures should rather be preventive; discouraging
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environmentally harmful human
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, rather than isolating and conserving only endangered species.
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, placing emphasis only on the selective few on the verge of extinction; means that no plan is on the ground for other organisms, provided they
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become endangered. That being said, the other proponents who believe that emphasis should be on the threatened wild
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have a valid point. Protecting all
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may be unrealistic, and
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less pragmatic.
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is because some of the causes of environmental degradation are unavoidable natural or human-related events that cannot be controlled.
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, concentrating effort toward safeguarding all wild
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may be an extremely difficult project to embark upon.
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, the increasing drought in some arid areas due to the effect of increasing global temperature, and less precipitation is a major environmental problem
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difficult to prevent and can affect all
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living in the bush.
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, it is just worthwhile to protect only the threatened ones. In conclusion, though preventing human-related
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that can have devastating effect effects on environmental health is a good measure, it may not save all wild
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; rather isolating and preservation of endangered organisms appear to be a more pragmatic endeavour. I strongly believe that
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will achieve a more productive effect in the long run.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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