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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Human beings have been evolving for a long period of
time
,
that
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 they come up with many ways to communicate with each other;
therefore
, they established their own method to socialize with their peers. There is debate among individuals that people should learn a new
language
 if they have the intention of working abroad, whereas others
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 believe that there are reasons that surpassed that
precpective
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perspective
.
This
 essay examines both sides of
this
 argument, and why I believe that learning a new
language
 has many advantages. On one hand, there is a group that has the notion that an individual should spend their
time
 wisely, and to do so is by linking
time
 and capital gain.
To begin
 with, they believe that
someone
 can spend their
time
to learn
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 a new
language
,
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 if that person already
have
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 received a job offer from a country that has a different
language
.
Therefore
, that allocation of
time
 should be exchanged with something that could benefit that person.
On the other hand
, there is a consensus that believes that learning a new
language
 could be beneficial.
Firstly
, many
neuroscienists
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neuroscientists
 believe that learning a new
language
 would create
a new paths
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a new path
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 in
someone
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 mind.
Thus
, these paths might enhance their memory and cognition.
This
 is because the process of obtaining a new
language
 means that
someone
 will use all of their senses. In conclusion, it is often thought that the primary reason for an individual to learn a new
language
 is to work abroad, while there are others, that disagree with
this
 statement. I believe that both sides have merits. On balance,
however
, it is my opinion that allocating
someone
time
 to gain a new
language
 might impact their
life
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 positively.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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