Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Even though there is a popular agreement that
life
today is harder and uncomfortable than it was when your grandparents were children,I have a different opinion. I totally disagree with this
. There are two reasons why I think this
is critically important, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin
with, the world has changed since my parents
were young. Nowadays, it is easier than the
past ten Change preposition
in the
years
to commute ,and people
are able to spend their lives
anywhere around the world because the
transportation is so convenient. My personal experience is a compelling example of Correct article usage
apply
this
. About five years
ago, I was planning to take a vacation to Europe for 2 weeks. My job gave two
weeks Correct pronoun usage
me two
vacation
paid and I was able to request the vacations in advance to manipulate my leisure plans. Change preposition
of vacation
This
made my life
easier when I organized. On the other hand
, when my parents
were bureaucrats, they did not have long vacations like me because there were
Change the verb form
was
shortage
of staff. If I had worked for the government, I would not Add an article
a shortage
the shortage
had
had Change the verb form
have
long
vacation like Add an article
a long
this
. Therefore
, traveling is easier than the
past Change preposition
in the
that
make my Correct pronoun usage
apply
parents
were not able to travel as much as they could.
Secondly
, In this
modern life
, technology
is a part of people
's lives
and it uses
easier than Verb problem
is
the
past ten Change preposition
in the
years
. It helps people
to have comfortable lives
. During pandemic
, Add an article
a pandemic
the pandemic
people
are using technology
to work remote
, students are Change the word
remotely
also
using the benefits of technology
to take classes at home. For instance
, I have been taking classes at home for a
several Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
years
since the pandemic has
started. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
is
not only Unnecessary verb
apply
save
the expenses from Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
the
public transportation but it is Correct article usage
apply
also
save
my time to avoid traffic during rush hour. If I had taken Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
the
public transportation, I would have paid Correct article usage
apply
a
hundreds Correct article usage
apply
Change preposition
of dollar
dollar
per month. Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
However
, when my parents
were children, they were able to travel only in the country and they had to use a map for navigation because the technology
did
not easy to access. Verb problem
was
As a result
, technology
will make people
’s lives
are convenient than the
past.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that I have an easier and better Change preposition
in the
life
than my parents
had just a few decades ago. This
is because I enjoy much more leisure time than they did,
and because Remove the comma
apply
technology
is easier than the
past to access.Change preposition
in the
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