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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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Some
people
 state that the waste from homes hasn't been completely recycled. In order to raise the rate of recycling, the governments should make it a legal requirement that seems to be the only and direct solution. The essay will discuss
this
 issue and summarize my own point of view. I totally agree with the statement that the
government
 should set up laws and regulations on recycling. In general, there are many benefits of recycling.
To begin
 with, recycling correctly can reduce the amount of
garbage
 waste.
Moreover
, it can
also
 decrease the loading of the incinerator which can lower the air pollution while Incinerating
garbage
.
Government
 should put more effort in order to promote citizen recycling.
Firstly
, sep up
garbage
 waste-related regulations. In Taiwan, we have specific plastic bags for
garbage
 which is designed by the
government
. The
garbage
 should be packed in a specific plastic bag so it can be taken to the landfill.
Secondly
, increase the cost of dealing
garbage
.
For instance
, there are leftover and
garbage
 machines in Korea which were placed in every neighbourhood,
people
 will have to place their food waste and
garbage
 on the
machine
 and get weight. Afterwards, the
machine
 will show the price on the screen, they will have to pay before throwing away their
garbage
. Forasmuch,
people
 will learn how to recycle so they could lower the price from dealing
garbage
.
Finally
, set up rewards to improve the willingness on recycling. According to the experiment from psychologists, rewards can stimulate
people
 for doing something they don't familiar with. In some Western countries, they had a
machine
 called a recycling
machine
 in which you can insert cans, plastic bottles and glasses to earn some money or market vouchers from it. The more you bring the more you can earn,
thus
, it could encourage
people
 to do
garbage
 recycling. To conclude, along with
people
 nowadays are likely to pursue high quality and efficient living experience, more and more non-necessary
garbage
 has been made at the same time. The
government
 should take
this
 issue seriously and set up rules of recycling to lower the harm to our mother earth.
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