Some people think controls should be made for the media such as newspaper to publish other people’s private lives, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that the activities of the
media
such
as the national dailies as regards publication about people's personal lives should be checked while others have argued that no
such
restrictions be placed in their duties.
This
essay agrees with the former position that there should be restrictions on information, particularly those relating to people's private matters; that can be released to the public domain. The essay will discuss both views. To start with, people should have rights to their own private lives, and
such
rights must be protected by the state.
In other words
, encroaching on
such
legal entitlement of the members of society by the press, through releasing confidential information personal to them without their consent or approval, can be considered as violating their rights, except
such
matter borders around a threat to the public peace.
For example
, a press agent can be liable, if they publicly release confidential details of an individual without having obtained the necessary permission, and
such
agent may have to pay through their nose, compensations to the concerned individual.
Conversely
, restricting the activities of the
media
in
this
way, limit them significantly from effectively performing their duties, especially in the case of information pertaining to officials holding public services.
Such
constraining law will not allow them to carry out proper investigative journalism as essential,
besides
, the public is looking up to them to release unbias and full reports from time to time. A good example is the case of a government official who embezzled public funds, and he or she is being investigated by the
media
. He can now hide under the cover of the law to restrict the publication of news concerning his misconduct, and can even buy his way through to beat justice. In conclusion, though the
media
, should be allowed to perform their duties without restriction, I believe the right of an individual to his or her confidentiality is sacrosanct and should be protected by the law of the land.
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