Some believe that pupils should be given less homework, others say the opposite. What is your opinion?

Opinions are divided on whether it is more effective to give
pupils
more
homework
or whether it is more beneficial to give
pupils
less
homework
. I believe that
pupils
should be given more
homework
. On the one hand, less
homework
would provide more
time
to
pupils
. They might be able to do all the
homework
as sooner as possible and
then
spend the rest of their
time
with family, friends and even have
time
to do sports,
For instance
, due to a large number of
homework
pupils
are not able to do what they like and
this
can have a bad effect on the
pupils
such
to as cause disgust for learning and constant stress.
In addition
, less
homework
would mean more rest
time
and of course more sleep. According to the facts, in order to be healthy, the pupil must sleep at least 6 hours a day, and
also
try to go to bed before 12 at night.
This
has a marvellous effect on the production of melatonin, which is very necessary for the pupil for body growth.
On the other hand
, a large amount of
homework
in most cases ensures the successful passing of exams and good academic performance in general.
For example
, it is by no means clear that
pupils
who have more
homework
have more practise and
therefore
great experience.
Thus
such
a pupil can be ready for almost all difficulties. To illustrate, a large number of
homework
might not allow the student to relax and start doing bad things.
For instance
, some
pupils
from the fact that there is nothing to do, can become criminals, start smoking and drinking. But due to the large number of
homework
, the
pupils
may not have
time
to think about anything other than studying in order to have
time
to submit everything on
time
. In conclusion, despite the fact that more
homework
would not provide a better health and study/life balance, I believe that a good academic performance and a lifestyle without any bad habits are worth it.
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