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Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper?

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News
, a broader terminology has observed variations in its delivery to the audience where people are updated on the knowledge
that is
 far from being factual. In my opinion,
News
 media and its manipulative information have led to more
of
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falsehood portrayed in recent times. In
this
 essay, the significance of newspaper and opinion over its authenticity would be discussed. To commence with, the
News
 channels have a setup for rehearsing the message to be shared in them wherein many of the data get accessed and altered as per political or social influence.
This
 data is
then
 let out on the channel with subjective opinions of the involved parties
thus
 making them a more unreliable resource.
For instance
, a disclosure broadcast brought into the limelight the winning election results whereas a natural disaster with terrorist violence was encountered in the same place.
This
 has led to distrust in the
news
 media per
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 where the facts are more often subjective. In another context, the benefits of having a newspaper at hand
,
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 has gradually declined
owing
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 to
the
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technological advancement.
However
, some of the eminent reasons for its use would be the headline
news
 for daily readers, weather forecasts, horoscopes, job vacancies and placements and discounted offers to make a purchase.
Nevertheless
, the older population are more inclined to its usage when compared to the younger generation. Though all of
this
 information
are
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 overruled by
the
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technological advances, it must be genuinely delivered to the public. In conclusion, though
the
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news
 telecasting has
discrepancy
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 towards its subjective approach for delivering the
news
 on television,
it's
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 authenticity must not be compromised.
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