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Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both view and give your opinion

#people #city
There are tremendously controversial perspectives heating up a debate
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 ideal place for accommodations. While some claim that it does wonder for residents to settle in a far-flung expanse, the opposite makes a statement that dwelling in taller buildings is better. While each
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 is valid to some extent, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned elements Without a shadow of a doubt, a vast
city
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favorable
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 influence on citizens’ lives. Given the fact that each family member
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 a chance to fully enjoy s personal space for
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daily life, especially recreational activities.
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, an extended family residing under one roof will be benefited from a land-based house which can make sure their private space not to be disturbed. In conclusion, living in a large-sized house does wonder for
city
 inhabitants. While the redeeming features of dwelling in a wide area of land is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if that of
vertical
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city
 is neglected. Owing to the dire issue of
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 population, skyscrapers are the equivalent remedy to deal with inhabitants’ demands in terms of long-lasting accommodations. Hanoi which is the capital of Vietnam can be cited as
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 example when it is a restricted land.
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, the springing up of a wealth of unsighted
building
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such
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 or time cities offers a wide range of choices for apartment consumers. In summary, high-rises constructions act as a precursor in handling
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the overpopulation All in all, even though owning a private house brings immense impacts on personal space for residents, skyscrapers is beneficial in tackling the grave population regarding
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population.
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