At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, there are some

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with a large

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of young adults, compared with the

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of older

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. They have advantages and disadvantages for

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situation,

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, I believe the benefits outweigh the disadvantages for three reasons.

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of all, these

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might be increase their incomes with the young

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. Compared to the elderly

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, the young

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is good at coming up with new ideas.

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, they can start new businesses more and expand them with several perspectives. With

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condition, these

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can earn a large

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of money by new ideas by young

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.

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, these

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can reduce the

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of illness and it improves their financial situation of them.

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, the Japanese government paid 45 per cent of all tax income for

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medicine in 2021, especially the 80 per cent of the

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was used for

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aged more than 60 years old. If the

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of older

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is low, the government can reduce the medicine

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gradually.

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, these

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might improve the level of

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's satisfaction. According to National research issued by Spain, an investigation showed that the country with a large

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of the younger

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had a high result of

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's satisfaction. The research said that young

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tend to satisfy with their life easier by having their dreams for the future, on the other ,hand it is difficult to satisfy with their life for older

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because they have a lot of concern for their future. There is a huge argument for

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situation,

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I believe the advantages of the condition outweigh the disadvantages by three reasons. By increasing the country's income by new ideas, reducing the

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for illness, and improving citizen satisfaction.