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Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. To what extent do you agree with this view? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

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Some individuals have argued that to earn recognition in
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's professional field, it is better to chat a career
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 at an early age; and be resolute in pursuing it.
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 essay agrees strongly with
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 opinion of starting a professional journey early in
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 and being determined to see it through as it helps
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 to have greater achievements, and gives
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 ample opportunity to practice as a
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 for a longer duration of
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.
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,
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 benefit of starting early in the
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 toward specialization is the opportunity of having greater achievements than those who choose a career
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 late in
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. When
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 begins
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's professional calling early in
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,
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 is likely to be fully committed to
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 endeavour and waste less
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 in running after irrelevance, and
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 makes him or her record speedy achievements. To exemplify
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, if a child who is passionate about medicine begins his career journey as early as when he was in secondary schools, knowing that he needs to focus more on science and related courses and as
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, gives his commitment toward these subjects and before the
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 he aces his college examinations and will be enrolled in the medical school at a very early age.
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 a fellow is likely to finish as a doctor in no
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 and start to practice.
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, he will achieve better than his contemporaries who probably start late.
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, owing to the fact that
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 is able to finish quite early
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's professional goal,
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 is able to enjoy long years of practising as a
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, with its attendant benefits of earning higher pay, and developing professional experience.
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,
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 becomes well recognized and established in the chosen field of study especially if he or she does not digress from the chosen
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, if
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 graduated from university quite early in
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, he or she is likely to settle down early, and start working as a
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 very early in
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. In conclusion, starting the
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 as a
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 early in
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, and maintaining focus, has many benefits; as it makes
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 have greater achievement and allows
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 to enjoy a longer span of practice as a professional.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Career longevity
  • Job market dynamics
  • Technological advances
  • Globalization
  • Expertise
  • Adaptability
  • Career advancement
  • Financial stability
  • Job satisfaction
  • Burnout
  • Specialization
  • Fulfilling
  • Personal development
  • Diverse experiences
  • Life events
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