The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant. write at least 150 words.
The changes in
the
Correct article usage
apply
road
access to a city hospital between the year 2007 and 2010 was
shown in the map. Change the verb form
were
Overall
, the three notable changes that can be observed are bus
station, two roundabouts, and a separate Correct article usage
a bus
car
parking for the public.
In 2007, the hospital, which was located inside the Ring Road
circle had only one access to the City road
, which is via Hospital Road
at the south. This
straight road
has either six bus
stops on both sides and towards its East; a car
park for staff and the public.
The most notable changes
in 2010 Fix the agreement mistake
change
is
the development Change the verb form
are
in
Change preposition
of
transportation
system, wherein the six Add an article
the transportation
bus
stops before has
transformed Change the verb form
have
in to
a large Join the words
into
bus
station towards the west of the
Hospital Correct article usage
apply
Road
. There are also
two roundabouts now, one at the intersection of Ring Road
and Hospital Road
, and the other at the intersection of Hospital Road
and City Road
.
Finally
, the car
park on the east side of Hospital road
was made exclusively for staff and a public car
park was set up at
the east side of the hospital.Change preposition
on
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