The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant. write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant. write at least 150 words.
The changes in
the
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road
access to a city hospital between the year 2007 and 2010
was
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shown in the map.
Overall
, the three notable changes that can be observed are
bus
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a bus
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station, two roundabouts, and a separate
car
parking for the public. In 2007, the hospital, which was located inside the Ring
Road
circle had only one access to the City
road
, which is via Hospital
Road
at the south.
This
straight
road
has either six
bus
stops on both sides and towards its East; a
car
park for staff and the public. The most notable
changes
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in 2010
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the development
in
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transportation
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system, wherein the six
bus
stops before
has
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transformed
in to
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a large
bus
station towards the west of
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Hospital
Road
. There are
also
two roundabouts now, one at the intersection of Ring
Road
and Hospital
Road
, and the other at the intersection of Hospital
Road
and City
Road
.
Finally
, the
car
park on the east side of Hospital
road
was made exclusively for staff and a public
car
park was set up
at
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the east side of the hospital.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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