It is generally acknowledged that Marriage ceremony is becoming larger and more costly in
this
day and age. Regarding
this
, I believe that it has drawbacks.
This
essay will outline the certain reason why
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is being expensive, and suggest disadvantages that should be taken into consideration.
On the one hand, broadly speaking, as marriage is one of the major events in
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life,
people
desire to have the perfect moment.
Therefore
, the procedure of wedding is becoming sophisticated. Not only does a wedding
party
be required special steps
such
as exchanging wedding bands, cutting a cake and showing performance, it may
also
need various disposable items
such
as flowers and confetti.
For example
, recent media in
Korea
reports that at least 30000
is necessary to have a wedding
party
in
Korea
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excellent
party
. As the example clearly illustrates, a lot of money is needed to have the perfect wedding event.
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks
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.
Firstly
, due to the gap between the rich and the poor, while the wedding of rich
people
is getting bigger, poor
people
's burden is becoming larger.
For instance
, a survey conducted by the
Korea
Population Foundation has revealed that 5% of couples give up
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as they feel miserable at their poor wedding
party
compared to rich
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.
Hence
, it is
to point out that poor couples feel an excessive burden on
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.
Secondly
, an extraordinary wedding
party
causes environmental issues as an enormous amount of food and flowers are prepared
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the
party
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, they are abandoned, and food is getting rid of the
party
when
people
left it. In terms of
this
, a considerable amount of food is wasted annually in
Korea
.
In conclusion, while
people
desire to have the
wedding event, big and expensive
party
causes many disadvantages in contemporary society.