Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think it should focus on academic study only. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that colleges play a significant
role
in scholar's life irrespective of
skills
and main subjects which are teaching by lectures.Some individuals claim that it is very necessary to concentrate on
skills
which are the essential things for getting a job in the upcoming days.
In contrast
,others argue that schools must point out towards the general topics like common topics
such
as the Science and Social,but according to
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both are very imperative to achieve our goals.
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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,why educational institutions should have to centre on the
skills
such
as communication and business which
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an indispensable
role
in everyone's life.
Firstly
,communication is the most significant factor to deal with foreigners.To elucidate,these days,mostly IT jobs rely on
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language as many professionals are used to interacting with other employees in that particular tongue only,so it is the main
role
to acquire a post.
Secondly
,nowadays,many individuals prefer to run their own company
instead
of work to other organisations,
therefore
they should be aware of money management,
thus
institutions need to be facilitated
such
skills
like how to invest money whey they start
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. On another hand,
although
such
types of
skills
are important,
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topics are
also
crucial for students as they need to
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of environmental science and
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.
For instance
,if they will learn these subjects at an early stage,
then
they will know like how to protect our earth from
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globalisation.Not only that
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have helped in protecting from human activities but
also
have assisted to identify the causes of
this
contamination.
Furthermore
,obtaining social studies
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considered
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very dominant as youngsters have to know the heritage of our cultures and traditions which have mentioned in that subject. To conclude,both statements are very imperative in their own ways.
Skills
play a major
role
to get an occupation,so educational institutions should have provided communication as well as business
skills
.While
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academic lessons are
also
important to get
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information
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our environment and culture.
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