Some people have argued that there will be no need for art galleries in the future because people can view works of art freely on the internet. Compare and contrast the benefits of viewing art in real life with viewing it on the internet. In your opinion, which is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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PREFER TO EXPLORE THE WORLD OF

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VIA THE INTERNET WITH NO CHARGE,

INSTEAD

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OF PHYSICALLY VISITING

ART

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GALLERIES OR MUSEUMS.

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, IT IS CLAIMED THAT

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GALLERIES AND MUSEUMS WILL BE UNNECESSARY IN THE FUTURE.

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ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN WHY I DISAGREE WITH

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STATEMENT AND WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR

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DECISION.

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OF ALL, MUSEUMS OR GALLERIES ARE NOT JUST BUILDINGS TO DISPLAY SOME IMPORTANT PIECES. THESE BUILDINGS CREATE AN ENVIRONMENT FOR PEOPLE TO SOCIALIZE WITH OTHER PEOPLE HAD THE SAME INTERESTS OR EXPERTS IN THAT FIELD,

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, GIVE HUMAN BEINGS A CHANCE TO FEEL THE

ART

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THROUGH THEIR FIVE SENSES.

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, DURING A PHOTOGRAPH EXHIBITION TOUR, IT CAN BE MET WITH THE PHOTOGRAPHER AND

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THE STORIES BEHIND OF SHOOTS FROM THE

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MOUTH

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IN ADDITION

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, THE PHOTOGRAPHS MAY BE FULLY APPRECIATED, THANKS TO BACKGROUND TUNES OR THE ODOR OF THE ROOM IN WHICH ARE CHOSEN BY PHOTOGRAPHERS.

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, VISITING HISTORICAL OR ARTISTIC PLACES VIA THE INTERNET CAN ENLARGE THE NUMBER OF VISITORS DUE TO FREE ENTRANCE AND NO PHYSICAL REPLACEMENT REQUIRED. DESPITE TO THESE ADVANTAGES,

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ONLINE EXPERIENCE CAN NOT REPLACE WITH BEING IN THE SAME AMBIANCE WITH THE ARTWORKS.

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TO LACK OF SENSATION, THERE IS AN INFORMATION POLLUTION ON WEBSITES. TO ILLUSTRATE, AT THE BEGINNING OF ISOLATION, IT WAS FREE TO VISIT LOUVRE MUSEUM ONLINE FOR ONE DAY AND NEEDLESS TO SAY I IMMEDIATELY ENROLLED ON THE WEBSITE. BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT IT WAS NOT IMPRESSED ME BECAUSE OF THE ABSENCE OF A TOUR GUIDE, LACK OF SENSATIONS

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AS SMELL OR HEARING OF THE ATMOSPHERE. TO CONCLUDE, DESPITE THE EXCLUSIVE OPPORTUNITIES IT PROVIDES, SINCE

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LOVERS WILL CONTINUE TO COME TOGETHER IN BUILDINGS OR PLACES IN THE FUTURE, ONLINE EXPERIENCE WILL NEVER TAKE OVER PHYSICAL

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