In the future,nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It may be true that there will be nobody who will purchase

newspapers

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books

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due to easy access to read everything which

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desired by

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online without payment but there are some drawbacks which can lead to consequences in society. In my opinion, I suggested that

newspapers

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books

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should be continued to print out due to some reasons

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as some areas which do not

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to the Internet, some writers and paper

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In the following paragraphs I will discuss why I fully disagree with that mentioned statement and develop my opinion. Writers who write a story or some knowledge in their book by their effort and publish it to the public

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were given their knowledge and life on their published book. The most significant reason for

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is that they aim themselves to become a famous writer and they want to offer their experiences and

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that some

people

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did not know. Perhaps a writer gains salaries which are depended on his life, from their published book so that their life will be easy in future if

people

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buy their published

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in the following years. Another fact which is forced to produce the printed

newspapers

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is that there are some areas which do not access to the Internet. As the

people

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in some villages which are far away from the urbanized regions and do not get modernized with technology, they continue reading the printed newspaper in which can know the happening cases around the world and some children in that area read some printed

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, the paper factories will not gain salaries to give their workers if there is no longer printed newspaper or

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in the future. To conclude, not only the villages and some areas can get information about the world and other knowledge from the printed newspaper and

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but

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the writers can gain their salaries and succeed

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aims. I strongly believed that printed

newspapers

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books

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should still be printed and bought by

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whether they will

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to read everything they want

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online without paying

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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351 words

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