Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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and women have equal rights to show their personalities and characteristics. It is unfair that

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shows are much more pervasive than women’s ones. Despite the fact being that, I disagree with

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phenomenon simply because of customer predilection and interesting matches from

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teams.

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these days often follow a

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field especially football and they are impressed by the talents of

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soccer players. At that time, they will admire players and give a great fascination to soccer. Due to the fact that there are lots of

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who are concerned about football, TV channels prioritize broadcasting

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shows to serve their demand.

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, thanks to skills and intelligence,

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players create thrilling matches which conquer the

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of all

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and lead more

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to football.

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programs are shown wide-spreadly.

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, there are several reasons to argue the aforementioned benefits, two of which are the equality of both genders and meeting a variety of different groups’ demands. Chief among these is that women

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have the right to take part in

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shows to prove their strength and talent.

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have no reason to prevent them from chasing their dream and fulfilling their goals. What’s more, there are a large number of

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following

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matches, not only because of

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teams but

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because of women’s ones. For

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reason, TV programs should diversify entertainment to attract and adapt to the specific needs of each category of customer. In conclusion, I am not supportive of

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inequality, it takes a long

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Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

Your opinion

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