You are a student at a University in the UK. You have recently lost your University ID Card. Write to the local police station giving details of: who are you? what happened? Ask to record your details so that you can apply a new ID card.

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Dear sir, I am writing

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to file a complaint for losing my University

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card

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. My name is Trevor Noah and I am a graduate arts

student

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at GFD college, London. Recently I have attended the city fest which was held at park stadium. We had

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fee discount for the ticket

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I have carried my

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card

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to the festival.

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, after returned to home I noticed that my

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card

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has been lost from my pocket. I have enquired to the authority who held the festival, but they haven't rerceived any lost

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card

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such

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. I was advised by university professor to lodge a complaint against the lost so that I can apply for a new

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card

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as per the university process. Please find my details below. Name: Trevor Noah, Age: 20, College Name: GFD college, London, Department: 2nd Year graduate arts

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, Contact No: +9086-888-455 Could you please help me to log the details and let me know if anything else is required from my side. Thank you. Your's faithfully, Trevor Noah

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Consider adding a specific request for the police to confirm that they have logged your details. This would fully complete the response to the task.

coherence cohesion

There are minor grammatical errors and a few awkwardly phrased sentences. Proofreading and revising these errors can improve coherence.

task achievement

You covered all the major points required by the task: identification of yourself, an explanation of what happened, and a request to record the details.

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Your tone is appropriate for a formal letter, showing respect and politeness throughout.

coherence cohesion

The opening greeting and closing are correctly and appropriately used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

180 words

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You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you have encountered a problem.Write a letter to the manager.In your letter describe what the problem was tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Air pollution in cities is growing at an alarming rate. What measures could be taken to address this problem?

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IN MANY CITIES TODAY MOST PEOPLE LIVE IN LARGE APARTMENT BLOCKS DOES THIS KIND OF ACCOMODATION HAVE MORE ADVANTAGES OR MORE DISADVANTAGES