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As a medical professional, I have a strong interest in combining technology with my healthcare expertise to enhance the treatment and life quality of
patients
. Recently, I have had an opportunity to collaborate with a start-up on a digital care project that aims to create chest wearable devices to help physicians monitor COPD
patients
 easier by collecting
physiological
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 parameters of
patients
 remotely. We have
also
 developed an A.I model
that is
 capable of predicting early COPD exacerbations based on hospitalization history and abnormal symptoms from collected data.
As a result
, physicians can monitor remotely, increase self-management of
patients
, intervene promptly and avoid hospitalization. I have acknowledged how technology applications can help improve
patients
’
life
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 and I am motivated to conduct
further
 research projects on developing A.I models that can predict chronic disease progression and exacerbation by analyzing healthcare big data, biomarkers,
patients
’ history and medication. Both
patients
 and physicians will be alerted by messages when
exacerbation
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 is detected. Enrolling on the health informatics program will help me sharpen health data analysis skills, upgrade my competency of handling medical complexity by using technology and prepare to lead A.I based changes in the healthcare settings in the future.
Moreover
, being admitted to the Vector program will be a great opportunity to gain deeper knowledge in the field and broaden my network with
like minded
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 A.I experts. I strongly believe that my passion, abilities, academic achievements and related work experience will make me a strong candidate for
this
 program.
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