Some people are happy to spend their whole lives in the same area. Other people prefer to live in many different areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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hold different views about living, some
people
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prefer to spend their entire life at
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place
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, but others prefer to transfer to different
places
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. In my opinion, I partially agree as I believe that an individual should explore different
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, but eventually needs to settle down in
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place
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to start a family. On the
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hand, some
people
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may have
emotional
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an emotional
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attachment towards their hometown or the
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where they are living
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many years.
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is mainly because an individual may feel content and relaxed.
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, an individual living in
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place
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, since birth, may have
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childhood friends living in the same city,
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’s school and other beautiful memories may make the
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more memorable to live in;
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, it will be difficult to leave the
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.
On the other hand
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, some
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are curious about different
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;
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, they move out from
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city to another. The main reason is that each
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has its own uniqueness and
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after knowing about
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places
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may feel they want to explore it by living there.
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, recently an article was published in a Travel magazine about a teenager who wanted to explore different
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, in India, and has lived in five different cities.
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, it is not easy for a family person to switch areas, as it may negatively impact their children. It would not only harm their studies but
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it will consume time to adjust to a new
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. In conclusion, I believe that
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should explore different
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,
nevertheless
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, it would be difficult to migrate with a family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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