Country are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to globalization, it is generally acknowledged that the public can spend budgets on

the

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similar

products

everywhere in

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contemporary society. Some world population argue that it affects negatively.

However

, I strongly believe that it is beneficial. There are certain reasons. On the one hand, some people have concern that using the same

products

can decrease the national identity of the citizens who live in minor

conturies

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countries

. It is common to purchase the

goods

that are exported from rich nations

such

as America and China.

Therefore

,

avoriginal

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aboriginal

people neglect

trational

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traditional

commodities.

For example

, recent media reports that

first

nations have lost their culture owing to by using modern

products

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illustrates

, having the same

goods

can be a key factor in destroying national identity in certain societies.

On the other hand

, choosing the same commodities can reduce the

conflic

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conflict

conflicts

between countries since rapport is

fomed

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formed

by purchasing them, thereby leading to making a relationship.

For instance

, a survey conducted by the Korea

Consmerist

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Consumerist

Foundation has revealed that 10%

Koreans

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tend to be more friendly to a

foriegner

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foreigner

who uses the same Korean product.

Therefore

, it is reasonable to point out that having a

relation

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with buying the same

goods

can be an efficient means to understanding each other.

Furthermore

, using the same

products

can reduce the gap between the poor and the rich. Due to industrialization and automation, the price of

goods

become affordable.

Hence

, poor children can have electronic devices

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less

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costly

price

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.

In particular

, in Cambodia, common affordable electronic

devices'

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devices

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companies

such

as Samsung and Apple facilitate

childeren

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children

to study, so they provide a chance to reduce the disparity between the rich group and the poor group. In conclusion, while I accept that using the same commodities in the world can sometimes be negative as it declines national identity,

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I would point out that the positive sides overwhelm the negative aspects.