Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children that are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some argue that competition should be motivated in young
people
while others prefer to encourage cooperation. Use synonyms
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essay will discuss both ideas and explain why the latter rather than the former is the best of them.
It is known that many animals compete against another member of the same species. Linking Words
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happens because competition has an important advantage: it improves specific features and there is no exception in humans. Linking Words
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stronger and playing chess makes them better at planning strategies. Use synonyms
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too competitive can be very individualistic and sometimes it can even affect their social lives. Use synonyms
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happens when are too obsessed to be the best that they isolate themselves to improve their Linking Words
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, another benefit is that the Linking Words
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as problem-solving. The only disadvantage is that the Linking Words
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are perfected more slowly than in a competitive environment.
To sum up, young Use synonyms
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can benefit from improving certain talents with competition but doing it through cooperation is , in my opinion, always more beneficial for them because they can become more sociable.Use synonyms
Submitted by ignaciogigli on
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