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the alteration of the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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The given maps illustrate the alteration of the
road
 access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Overall, there are noticeable changes after the constructions take place and the significant changes can be seen in the addition of extra facilities. In 2007, the hospital was located towards the north, which was surrounded by a ring
road
 towards the south
of
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which connected with the hospital
road
 running from the north to the south. Another main
road
 was there towards the south of
this
road
 running from the west to the east. On each side of the hospital
road
, toward the west and the east were six bus stops and there was the car
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park
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par
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 for staff and
and
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public
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 on the east. An enormous change can be seen in 2010, the two
roundabout
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 were added, one between the hospital
road
 and the ring
road
, whereas another one between the hospital
road
 and the city
road
. These two
roundabout
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 connected with a large bus stop towards the west, the six bus stop in 2007 was removed. The original parking
ares
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area
 retained
its
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 place but provide for staff only, while the addition of the new car park was constructed towards the east of the hospital, which
was provide
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 for the public only
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