Children can learn effectively by simply watching television, therefore they should be allowed to do so to watch T.V. regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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want to watch, at school or at home, because it is a more effective way of learning.

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, while I agree that,

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is more visual and can be created as a more entertaining way for learning, I disagree that,

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should be allowed to do so regularly.

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,

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are not always educational. Some subject matters may not be suitable for young minds. For example

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with abusive language and violence. These promote unhealthy behaviour, and by letting kids watch regularly, they could become victims of

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, which later could lead to social problems.

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,

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, it is discourages socialising and working as a group.

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, a

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may find it difficult to interact with others and become a team player. As

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, it can be more difficult for a

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to adjust to society when they grow up.

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's performance, plus it is impossible to clarify matters when they are too

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to understand. These shows are created for a larger audience,and not all

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are at the same intellectual level. In the vent a

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requires to get

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clarification, it becomes impossible, as

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. is only one-way communication and correcting errors become nearly impossible.

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,

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on

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's concentration does not waver.

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making it a more effective way to teach a lesson. In conclusion, I disagree that,

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should be allowed to watch

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because not all

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are suitable for

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, and they do not encourage group behaviour, plus communication is one-way; limiting the ability to get feedback or clarification on the subject matter.