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What do you think of the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

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The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making
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 from
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 cane. “How
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 Is Produced From
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 Cane” is the name of the diagram below illustrating the process of manufacturing
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 popular product. As can be seen,
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 procedure has seven steps from harvesting
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 canes to centrifuging syrup. Harvesting
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 the
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 step could be done either by hand or machine after 12- 18 months of growing of
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 cans. In the
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 step, cans would be crushed to produce a white juice.
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, with a limestone filter, the juice will be purified. After that, in an evaporator on heat, the juice becomes syrup. The two
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 steps belong to centrifuging the syrup and drying and cooling
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 crystals processes. It is not a secret that human being is interested in brand new items and always has been seeking modernity and advancement to provide a better answer to their requirements and desires. Even if you take a look at a fundamentalist group, the Taliban
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, you can realize that they are enthusiastic to attain new guns and other advanced military weapons.
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 being new is a claim based on people's ambitions. Having a more accurate look at
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 claim will reveal its drawbacks. After being motivated by a misleading advertisement, some customers will be tempted to purchase the so-called new item.
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, soon they will find that there are no meaningful differences between purchased goods and the previous ones.
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 not only would cause a sense of frustration, but
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 could bring disappointment to consumers.
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, when the vast majority of the population has shared experiences in
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 way, it might cause mental health disorders in society. To sum up, false ads that are not based on telling the truth, in my opinion, are a kind of misuse of human demands and have more negative consequences. Their only positive aspect might be raising companies’ profit.
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, because of their disadvantages, I cannot consider them as a positive development in marketing or any other field.
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