A museum newr your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter explain why you want to voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you woule be available for work Write at least 150words. You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Noami Umami. I am writing to apply for the position of part-time voluntary work at the
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City Museum, which was advertised in the
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City newspaper on 3rd March 2022. I am sure that my qualifications and personality makes me a perfect candidate for the
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. I am currently a student at
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Art
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University, majoring in modern
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, and will be graduating in 2024. I have
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experience at a souvenir store located near
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Art
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University as a part-time sales clerk in summer 2021. During my part-time
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experience, I had gained team working skills, communication skills as well as time management skills that will be useful to do the volunteer work at the Museum. I would like to have
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opportunity so that it will stand me out for the
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hunting in the
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industry. My classes are usually held on weekdays, so I am available on the weekends. I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Naomi Umami
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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