Governments spend large amounts of money on art that not all people enjoy. This money could be better spent on things that benefit the majority of the population. Do you agree?

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has always been viewed as an

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life.

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, the

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is playing an increasingly important role in investing for its

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expansion

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investment is being

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by experts and it is widely accepted that there are a great number of more concerning issues that can be solved by

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money.

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, I believe that

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is a pivotal subject in our lives

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requires considerable attention. The following essay will overlook two rationals behind my belief.

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, mankind not only loves

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beauty but

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benefits from it.

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is one of the integral treatment methods

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specific diseases,like depression.

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, the

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prevalence

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condition has been increasing over

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decade.

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, if the

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spends money on increasing the access of people to

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topic, public health will increase which is the

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priority of governments.

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, the

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is expected to provide an appropriate situation for all of the society

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.

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the number of

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who are enjoying arts might not be considerable, they are vital parts of each community that have brought a lot of joy

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others

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lives.

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, the traditional singers might not be as many as they use to be but listening to traditional songs can remind a lot of good memories which might be forgotten without

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. These artists are valuable society

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,

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they deserve

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investment. To sum up,

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is a pivotal topic that needs the attention of the

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;

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,

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budget can be spent on other basic needs. I believe that the mental beneficial effects of

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and the responsibility of the

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toward all of

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the society

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members

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are two rationales that make

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enough valuable to be taken into account.