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Overall,
USA
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the USA
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 had the highest
number
 of
students
 from outside for both the years and Canada the least. Though, in comparison to the total strength of
students
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,students
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 the percentage of foreign
students
 studying in the USA was the least. From the data provided in the bar chart, we observe that the
number
 of
students
 in the USA from abroad stood at 175,000 in 2004, which saw a significant increase by almost 42% to 250,000 in 2012.
However
, only 2% of the total
students
 were foreign for 2004 and 2012.
In contrast
, Canada had
similar
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a similar
the similar
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number
 of individuals from abroad, for college, for both the years. The figures
,
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 were a little under 50,000 in 2004 and just over 50,000 in 2012.
Moreover
, the proportion of foreign
students
 was between 5% to 7%.
On the other hand
,
UK
 and Australia had a very similar profile on the
number
 of people coming from other countries as
students
. In 2004 the
number
 of pupils
were
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was
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 roughly the same at close to 125,000.
However
, Australia’s proportion of foreign to local
students
 was higher by 10% to that of
UK
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the UK
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 at 19%.
Likewise
, both countries saw an increase in the
number
 of foreign
students
 in 2012. Though
UK
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the UK
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 saw a higher increase as compared to Australia at close to 200,000 thousand
but
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Australia still dominated the proportion of outside
students
 to local
students
 at close to a quarter. Which was 10% more than the
UK
.
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