Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents. Some others believe that less controlling will help children deal with adults’ life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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need to follow the rules and listen to their

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, some people promote less control over

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will educate them to knowhow in the future life. In

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discuss these two arguments and provide opinions. Many

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, especially the older aged grew up in the sense that

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' rules are absolute;

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, to consider a good kid means listening to the

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statement is true to a certain degree because grownups have more education and life experiences compared to

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. As a parent, I can educate

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to know rights and wrongs and keep them away from harm's way.

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can be seen in the case of teaching

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that getting into a stranger's car or opening the to a stranger is a very dangerous action.

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, while obeying and listening to the

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is crucial, some

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encourage less control to their

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doing so, it will allow them to cope with future adulthood.

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is true when

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are always been educated or able to apply correct judgments to different scenarios,

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, it might be leading to a bigger problem.

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, the parent should always tell the

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fighting is a bad way to pursue your goal.

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, kids will just think that they can get anything through fighting. In conclusion, I believe both statements are beneficial to the

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, there needs to find a balance between them,

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as lesser control but still listening to the

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