Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life.

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Fashion
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is a very important part of someone's character. Your
fashion
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style can say many things about you. The way you dress can define you in modern society.
Fashion
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has been an interest to
people
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throughout history, it has just changed as we see it progress and have
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form of
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and use. Some
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argue that
fashion
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items
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are too expensive, others find it reasonable for the
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and rarity of the item or brand. Many kids want to be like their
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celebrities that have very expensive taste or that are being paid to wear certain
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from the brands themselves that are trying to be more global. Some teenagers ask their parents for these expensive
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clothes
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items
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but others can'
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afford them. It is commonly known that
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very rich celebrities
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as Mark Zuckerburg, Elon Musk, and Bill gates, three of the richest
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in the world that buy
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clothes
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.
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shows that the celebrities that are wearing these
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are getting paid to buy these brands for advertisement. I personally believe that there are many
fashion
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styles and designs that are not that expensive but can look very good. I think
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who can'
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afford
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who don'
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want to spend a lot of money on
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should buy cheap good
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items
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from local stores. I don'
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believe that
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and designer brands are expensive because of their
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, I believe they are expensive because of the brand name and relevancy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socio-economic gap
  • impractical consumer behavior
  • overspending
  • accumulation of debt
  • materialism
  • superficial values
  • self-esteem
  • self-expression
  • psychological benefits
  • social benefits
  • quality of materials
  • craftsmanship
  • sustainable practices
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