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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life.

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Fashion
 is a very important part of someone's character. Your
fashion
 style can say many things about you. The way you dress can define you in modern society.
Fashion
 has been an interest to
people
 throughout history, it has just changed as we see it progress and have
better
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 form of
quality
 and use. Some
people
 argue that
fashion
items
 are too expensive, others find it reasonable for the
quality
 and rarity of the item or brand. Many kids want to be like their
favorite
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 celebrities that have very expensive taste or that are being paid to wear certain
items
 from the brands themselves that are trying to be more global. Some teenagers ask their parents for these expensive
clothes
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items
 but others can'
t
 afford them. It is commonly known that
the
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very rich celebrities
such
 as Mark Zuckerburg, Elon Musk, and Bill gates, three of the richest
people
 in the world that buy
modern day
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clothes
.
This
 shows that the celebrities that are wearing these
clothes
 are getting paid to buy these brands for advertisement. I personally believe that there are many
fashion
 styles and designs that are not that expensive but can look very good. I think
people
 who can'
t
 afford
or
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 who don'
t
 want to spend a lot of money on
clothes
 should buy cheap good
quality
items
 from local stores. I don'
t
 believe that
Fashion
 and designer brands are expensive because of their
quality
, I believe they are expensive because of the brand name and relevancy.
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