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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life.

#people #fashion #items #cost #money #part #life
In the
world
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 today
fashion
 is one of the most spoken topics for teenagers and young
adults
. Some of these
people
 argue on whether the high prices for certain products are acceptable and others say it's acceptable because
fashion
 is important to them.
Firstly
i
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 will be talking about if these high prices are acceptable to pay for. Most
people
 today find that certain
fashion
 products are a key part
in
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of
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 their life so they don’t mind the price of the product. Some other
people
 get pressure from their other peers or family that they are untrendy. Due to these
comments
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 most
people
 are peer pressured into spending a lot of
money
for
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 new
clothes
. A lot of young teenagers
also
 look up to their celebrities and
on
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how they dress so these young
adults
 would like to look like their
favorite
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 celebrities. Most
people
 who aren’t really fond of
fashion
 have other thoughts in which they completely disagree on the high prices
people
 set on
clothes
. What these
people
 are trying to say is that they are trying to warn young
adults
 who still depend on their
parents
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parent's
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money
 because after they start work they would have difficulties in affording new
clothes
 due to the fact that they are saving up for certain needs. In the point of view of older
adults
fashion
 isn’t an important asset in their life so all these parents and grandparents totally disagree that all these products cost way more than normal designer wear or clothing. In my personal
opinion
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 I both disagree and agree
for
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 both points because I understand the fact that
fashion
 is big but you don’t need to buy a lot of it so you could save more
money
 for other more important assets. So I think that you can buy fewer designer
clothes
 and still have
money
 for your needs.
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