Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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Studying

English

at school is most important than local

languages

. If people can not learn local

languages

, that might be a risk of crisis to dying out. In my opinion, learning

English

is very important but local

languages

are both important too we should not stop teaching.

Firstly

, in

this

generation learning

English

is very popular and it is the best way to communicate with foreigners. Many Countries provide their citizen to study

English

as a

second

language

For example

, the Philippines, East Africa, and Hong Kong. Because the government knows that

English

is one of the international

languages

it can help the country raise its economy and keep its competitive strength. In my country Hong Kong, people have though

English

since 3 years old, Hongkongers have a good education in

English

it can help the economic growth up and attract different foreign companies to set up their branches in Hong Kong.

On the other hand

, local

languages

also

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important and

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they

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should keep learning in their own country. The local government should be encouraged people to share the local

language

with tourism. Hosting some

culture

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cultural

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activities to

contect

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contact

connect

the local

language

For example

, the Chinese poetry traditionally activities in every Luna Chinese New Year

its

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apply

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could link to

Chinese

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the Chinese

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word. In

conclustion

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conclusion

, I believe that

english

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is no doubt to learn but local

languages

were

also

need

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needed

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to keep,

that is

the

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important issue for

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next-generation

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the next

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generation indeed. Even each

language

we can learn and share with other

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Prediction or recommendation

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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