Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Studying
English
at school is most important than local
languages
. If people can not learn local
languages
, that might be a risk of crisis to dying out. In my opinion, learning
English
is very important but local
languages
are both important too we should not stop teaching.
Firstly
, in
this
generation learning
English
is very popular and it is the best way to communicate with foreigners. Many Countries provide their citizen to study
English
as a
second
language
.
For example
, the Philippines, East Africa, and Hong Kong. Because the government knows that
English
is one of the international
languages
it can help the country raise its economy and keep its competitive strength. In my country Hong Kong, people have though
English
since 3 years old, Hongkongers have a good education in
English
it can help the economic growth up and attract different foreign companies to set up their branches in Hong Kong.
On the other hand
, local
languages
also
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important and
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should keep learning in their own country. The local government should be encouraged people to share the local
language
with tourism. Hosting some
culture
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activities to
contect
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contact
connect
the local
language
.
For example
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could link to
Chinese
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word. In
conclustion
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conclusion
, I believe that
english
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is no doubt to learn but local
languages
were
also
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to keep,
that is
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important issue for
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next
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generation indeed. Even each
language
we can learn and share with other
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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