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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life.

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In our society,
fashion
 is a highly controversial topic. Many
people
 attach great importance to dressing well, which is why expensive brands of
clothes
 are becoming more and more popular.
However
, is it a good thing that we are becoming more and more inclined to buy expensive
clothes
? The pressure in our society to dress well is increasing,
this
 can be seen more and more,
also
 in teenagers. Many young adults want expensive branded
clothes
, but not everyone can afford them.
This
 leads to many problems, even to the point of teenagers being marginalized because of their
clothes
. Parents are
therefore
 under ever-increasing pressure to buy their children these
clothes
,
although
 they may not have the
money
, or want to spend it on something else. But even when young
people
 get older and earn their
first
money
, it is often difficult for them to buy these
clothes
 because they actually need the
money
 for something else. For these reasons, many
people
 argue that it is unacceptable that the
fashion
 industry is driving prices higher and higher.
On the other
hand
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 there are
also
people
 who support the way the
fashion
 industry is developing. They believe that good clothing has its price and find it wonderful how the selection and designers are constantly increasing. They find the expensive prices justified because they believe that
fashion
 expresses their personality and individuality. In conclusion, I would say that you should decide for yourself and not make it dependent on others whether you should buy expensive
clothes
. In my opinion, there are many cheap alternatives to the expensive designer labels today, which are technically on the same level. In my opinion, that means you can dress well for little
money
 if you value
fashion
.
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