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It is suggested that all young people should undertake a period of unpaid work to help people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people ?

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In
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 ever-changing scenario, lifestyle has changed a lot and
people
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 try to adjust to the varied situations.
As a result
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, many aspects have changed in
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 world
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 as technology, rules,
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's way of thinking, and so on. In
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 respect, there has been a thought that youngsters should involve in some activities in a society where they do not get paid.
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, I believe that it will bring a positive vibe to the public and to the young community if it is for a reasonable time period, but we should not ignore the negatives attached with it.
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 essay delves into the matter in detail to come to a logical conclusion.
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 with,
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 who do unpaid jobs for society is popular nowadays, especially among teenagers.
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, doing a job without getting paid can be beneficial not only for the humans who are doing it but
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 for the public.
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, hardly had one volunteer when it became an asset for him to get a job in priority since it enhances his experience in the working field. Apart from that, one could gain a good name among the crowd and
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 could become more sociable which benefits later on.
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, it can cause you trouble
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 as wasting time on something which would not give you money which could have been used on his wants and more than that, some parents could contradict to
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 statement, where their child working unpaid.
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,
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 who are financially unsounded could find
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 useless. To cite an example, a person who struggles to meet his daily expenses are not supposed to do free work
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 of studying their academics and trying to get a good job, so that he would be able to support his family as well. To put it in a nutshell, working unpaid has both advantages and disadvantages,but considering it as a good service to the society I believe merits outweigh demerits.
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