People should look after their health because this is a duty to the society not just a personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that people should value their body in terms of
health
because it is a responsibility to the nation not just for self intentions. Health
care
is important to focus on each individual for which it will not cause
any trouble to society. This
essay agrees that each individual should take care
of their well-being because it may cause
complications and may lead to the the
pandemic as well as Remove the redundancy
apply
a family obstacles
in terms of Correct the article-noun agreement
a family obstacle
family obstacles
money
.
Health
care
is one of the major complication
of our government, Change to a plural noun
complications
thus
resulting to
serious Change preposition
in
headache
. Even though the ministry is entitled to look for Fix the agreement mistake
headaches
solution
in the society's Add an article
a solution
the solution
health
care
it is still the person's responsibility to take care
his
well-being because there Change preposition
of his
are
Change the verb form
is
various
nation which has small Add an article
a various
far flung
places that cannot Add a hyphen
far-flung
be reach
by the Change the verb form
be reached
health-
Correct your spelling
healthcare
care
workers. Therefore
, leading to adversed
ramifications if not properly Correct your spelling
adverse
address
. Wrong verb form
addressed
For instance
, flu fever that
can be cured by self-awareness regarding flu season.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, the family members can start an obstacle for money
. For example
, my sister had dengue fever, my parents have no idea where to get the money
for medication. Therefore
, if the individual has an
ability to protect healthfulness, it may not Correct article usage
the
cause
trouble. The person also
should have an
initiative to protect his stamina causing to eliminate the minimal disease.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that each individual should protect Change the article
the
thei
well-being because it may Correct your spelling
their
the
them
cause
negative situations and scenario
and may lead to family problems about Fix the agreement mistake
scenarios
money
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