People should look after their health because this is a duty to the society not just a personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that people should value their body in terms of

health

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because it is a responsibility to the nation not just for self intentions.

Health

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care

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is important to focus on each individual for which it will not

cause

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any trouble to society.

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essay agrees that each individual should take

care

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of their well-being because it may

cause

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complications and may lead to the

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pandemic as well as

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a family obstacle

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in terms of

money

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.

Health

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care

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is one of the major

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of our government,

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resulting

to

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in

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serious

headache

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. Even though the ministry is entitled to look for

solution

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a solution

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in the society's

health

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care

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it is still the person's responsibility to take

care

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his

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well-being because there

are

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various

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nation which has small

far flung

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places that cannot

be reach

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by the

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health-

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healthcare

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care

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workers.

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, leading to

adversed

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adverse

ramifications if not properly

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.

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, flu fever

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can be cured by self-awareness regarding flu season.

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, the family members can start an obstacle for

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.

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, my sister had dengue fever, my parents have no idea where to get the

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for medication.

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, if the individual has

an

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ability to protect healthfulness, it may not

cause

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trouble. The person

also

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should have

an

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initiative to protect his stamina causing to eliminate the minimal disease. In conclusion, I strongly agree that each individual should protect

thei

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their

the

them

well-being because it may

cause

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negative situations and

scenario

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and may lead to family problems about

money

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savings.